Elden's teacher told him to revise his writing to improve one particular problem. Review her suggestions: 1. Begin sentences with an adverb.
2. Begin sentences with a prepositional phrase.
3. Combine sentences
4. Join ideas using an -ing verb form.
5. Join ideas using an -ed verb form
6. Join ideas using an appositive.
7. Join ideas using a relative clause.
When Elden revises his writing using his teacher's suggestions, MOST LIKELY his writing will
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A)
have more vivid descriptions.
B)
have a variety of sentence lengths.
have parallel structure and analogies.
D)
have declarative and imperative sentence types.

Motif in movies refers a. the opening credits b. shots of the beach c. the comments of movie reviewers d. a recurring pattern of images

Based on the cause-and-effect relationship in this sentence, what is the meaning of the word illuminate? the colors and patterns on the stained glass windows were illuminated as thousands of candles burned during the special church service. a) to melt or change form b) to grow taller or wider c) to become extremely hot d) to light up or make clear

How does the poem "the lady of shalott" by alfred, lord tennyson convey the position of victorian women? a curse is on her if she stay to look down to camelot. she knows not what the curse may be, and so she weaveth steadily, and little other care hath she, the lady of shalott. and moving thro' a mirror clear that hangs before her all the year, shadows of the world appear. there she sees the highway near winding down to camelot: there the river eddy whirls, and there the surly village churls, and the red cloaks of market girls, pass onward from shalott. a. most victorian women were restricted to their homes. b. victorian women were confined to domestic duties. c. most victorian women worked hard but were often bored. d. victorian women employed themselves by weaving.