Does this sound like a good story. into the Woods

In a little town in New York was a family. A baker, his wife, Emily and her little sister, me CJ. We lived in the bakery where we worked. I am a blonde girl, 13 years old, and is very overprotective of my older sister. Emily also has blond hair, 38 years old, and caring. The baker is different though. He has brown hair, 39 years old, and very stubborn. One day a witch came and told my sister and the baker that they could not have a child which they wanted for a long time now. She told them that if they wanted a child they would have to get her 4 things from the woods.

When we went into the woods I lost them and got lost in the woods. After a while they realized they had lost me and went to go look for me hoping I was ok. It was cold, dark, and very dangerous. I was scared. I wanted my sister. I was hoping they would find me soon, but I was wrong. The next day I was still in the woods all alone. I was starving, but then a 18 year old girl came and found me. She had brown hair and brown eyes. She took me to this cabin in the woods of hers and gave me food and I went back in the woods to look for Emily.

A little after a wolf came. It was a big black wolf with cold dark eyes. I asked it to not eat me and then it replied “I'm not going to eat you.” Then I realized I could talk to animals. I asked the wolf “Can you help me? I'm trying to find my sister.” She starts to track her down. We never found her because it got dark. She took us to her cave and let me sleep there. The next day we went looking again. I knew we were getting closer because I found Emily's necklace. I started yelling her name, but I heard nothing. I thought they would have given up by now and forgotten all about me, but I didn't give up, I kept looking. We stopped for the night.

I was the first to get up. I sat and waited for Bella to get up. I sat there remembering all the fun times me and Emily had together hoping she didn't give up on me. Bella got up and started to track her. I found her bracelet I made for her. I knew we were getting closer and closer. I couldn't wait to see Emily. She is the last real family member I have.

It was two days later. Me and Bella were looking for Emily. I heard Emily’s voice. I ran to it yelling her name. I found her. She told me that she was worried about me and that she thought she would never find me. I was so excited to see her. Tears were pouring down my face. We went to find the rest of the stuff for the witch and went back to her. We gave her the things and they got what they wanted. They had a baby boy and I became an aunt. I was so happy to be home. Everything was back to normal.

The End

Write a description about a boy with blonde hair that falls perfectly without him even trying. not about anything else like clothes or personality.

Asap read the bottom. use these 7 words to make 2 similies, 2 personification, 2 metaphors, and 1 of any so much backpack toaster drummer beach heart bicycle microwave examples: (if the examples were a quarterback, a wave, and stars) 1. the quarterback is a cheetah running down the field. (metaphor) 2. like a wave, the birds in autumn move through the air crashing into invisible shores. (simile) 3. the stars danced in the night sky. (personification) remember to write using complete, correctly capitalized sentences for each of the examples you provide. also, proofread and spell check carefully.

Plagiarism quiz read both the paragraph below and the information following it that identifies the source using the american psychological association format. then read each of the numbered statements and determine if each is plagiarized or not. circle “yes” if the statement is plagiarized, “no” if it is not, and then fix the “yes” answers). original source the presence of the taiwanese on everest was a matter of grave concern to most of the other expeditions on the mountain. there was a very real fear that the taiwanese would suffer a calamity that would compel other expeditions to come to their aid, risking further lives, to say nothing of jeopardizing the opportunity for other climbers to reach the summit. but the taiwanese were by no means the only group that seemed egregiously unqualified. camped beside us at base camp was a twenty-five-year-old norwegian climber named peter neby, who announced his intention to make a solo ascent of the southwest face, one of the peak’s most dangerous and technically demanding routes—despite the fact that his himalayan experience was limited to two ascents of neighboring island peak, a 20,274-foot bump that required little more than vigorous walking. krakauer, j. (1998). into thin air: a personal account of the mount everest disaster. new york: anchor books, 122 - 3. student samples yes 1. there was a very real fear that the taiwanese would suffer a calamity that would compel other expeditions to come to their aid(krakauer, 1998). no) 2. many climbers overestimate their abilities, as krakauer (1998) explains when he writes of peter neby, whose himalayan experience in the past “required little more than vigorous walking” (122 - 3). no 3. jon krakauer (1998) discusses other concerns besides those of unpredictable weather and his own climbing group’s capabilities. for example the existence of a taiwanese group on everest was a matter of serious unease to most everyone else on the mountain. yes/no 4. krakauer (1998) states that the taiwanese group was not the only inexpert climbers to attempt mt. everest: camped beside us at base camp was a twenty-five-year-old norwegian climber named peter neby. . [whose] himalayan experience was limited to two ascents of neighboring island peak, a 20,274-foot bump that required little more than vigorous walking (122 – 3). yes/no 5. the author asserts that the taiwanese “were by no means the only group that seemed egregiously unqualified.” yes/no 6. in his book into thin air, jon krakauer (1998) discusses many of the dangers he noted prior to his disastrous attempt to climb mt. everest in 1996. among them were encounters with other groups and individual climbers who were ill-trained and ill-equipped to handle the demands of such a climb.