Fix the run-on sentence by adding periods. crossing out words and starting new sentences. I love going to the zoo with my dad many of the animals are cool and we like looking at animals are cool and we like looking at animals especially lions because lions are really big and strong and strong animals are scary in real life but when they are in a cage it isn’t so bad but I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad so I don’t know if the animals are happy or sad but my dad says that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and I shouldn’t worry about them

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I love going to the zoo with my dad many of the animals are cool,especially lions because they are really big and strong.strong animals are scary in real life but when they are in a cage it isn’t so bad, but I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad,so I don’t know if the animals are happy or sad.My dad  says that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and I shouldn’t worry about them.I’m still not very sure if I believe him,but i just said ok.I also like the pengu becau they look very funny when they waddle.If I could be an animal I would still be a lion  though.Hope that helps,have a great day!

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