1 Alina realizes she has provided a weak thesis for her paper. Which of the following could
replace sentence 5 and provide a more effective thesis for Alina's paper?
A The truth is, when you go to summer camp you make so many new friends that you
never want to go home.
B. The best thing about summer camp is that the counselors are kind and friendly,
and you learn so many new things.
C Summer camp provides the kind of rich experience that every child should enjoy if
possible.
D Summer camp is important to me because it has allowed me to become part of a
loving community, attempt new things, and learn valuable lessons for life.