Please help me, thanks :)

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I think the song is beautiful

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Explanation:

There needs to be a focus, in this cause "I" is the focus. Without the "I" the reader dosen't know what or who thinks the music is beautiful.

for this, you need to remember something significant in your own life, for example, if you were bullied when you were younger, you can mention your memories on this and touch on how such treatment can harm other kids your age either physically or mentally. (racism, car crashes, a parent in the hospital are all very good subjects, think hard on it! )

hope i ! : )