Can someone read my essay and tell me what i need to fix? 100 pts Have you ever gone out and seen someone in public and thought, “Wow. They look weird.” or, “Wow they look so poor.”? These are examples of prejudice. Prejudice is an opinion that is not based on experience or real life. Prejudice is a behavior that most people develop over time as they are surrounded by more people of a different race, religion, and skin color. Some people think that prejudice comes as a learned instinct. Prejudice is a behavior that is not learned, but it is a behavior that is learned as people get more involved with others.

Prejudice is a natural behavior because it’s someone’s first thought about another person. In the book To Kill a Mocking Bird, Maybelle and Tom go on trial because Tom was accused of raping Maybelle, even though evidence showed that it was her father that was hurting her. Tom’s skin color was negro. People in Maycomb didn’t like people who were negro because they looked different. Tom had no choice but to go on trial because if he ran away, it would look like he did it. This was not fair to the negro colored people because most of them were found guilty of a crime that they didn’t do, and were sent to prison. In the present day, people think of others with a different religion, way of dress, and skin color by their first thought. For example, most Americans fight for BLM, and most don’t think that people of the negro skin color deserve American rights.

Prejudice is a natural behavior because it is not a family thought, it is a personal thought. In TKAM, the Finches have a negro maid in their house, and they each individually treat her as one of the family. That is their personal decision to treat her like that, even though the other people in Maycomb think it’s absurd to have her treated fairly. In the present day, many families have different thoughts on people with other religions/skin color other than American. For example, many people have different thoughts about a person that could be different from their family. If there is someone that you are friends with and they come over to your house, your family might not like them because they dress differently. They might be rude to your friend, and your friend will get upset.

Prejudice is a natural behavior. Some might say it is a learned behavior. While that can be somewhat true, it’s more on the thought of the individual and not the person or people who are trying to show them how to think or to act when seeing someone that looks different. Instead of looking at someone on the outside, start looking at them from the inside to know who they are.

Use varied language. If this is for school, use more formal language. You contradict yourself. The word negro is used incorrectly here. Your essay doesn't make sense. Please note that American is not a skin colour.

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Many people look upon others and judge them based on appearance and perceived social status and class. These are one of the many examples of prejudice.

Prejudice is an opinion that is not based on experience or real life. Prejudice is a behavior that most people develop over time as they are surrounded by more people of a different race, religion, and skin color.

Others might say that prejudice comes as a learned instinct. Prejudice is a behavior that is not learned, but it is a behaviour that adapts with environment and the types of people one grows up with. The factors that might affect one's prejudice include but is not limited to race, social status, sexuality, wealth, and gender.

Prejudice is a natural behavior because it’s someone’s first thought about another person.

A prime example is in the book To Kill a Mocking Bird,  where Maybelle and Tom go on trial because Tom was accused of raping Maybelle, even though evidence showed that it was her father that was hurting her.

Tom’s skin colour was darker. People in Maycomb didn’t like people who were darker and of a different ethicinty because they looked different. Tom had no choice but to go on trial because if he ran away, it would look like he did it.

This is not fair to minorities because certain minorities are more likely to get found guilty of a crime that they didn’t do, and get harsher sentences.

In the present day, people judge, albeit quietly , others based on redundant factors that should not limit us. This includes but is not limited to

For example, while some Americans fight for BLM, and other more conservative Americans do not agree with it, due to its violent nature.

Prejudice is a natural behavior because it is not influenced by others, it is a personal thought.

In TKAM, the Finches have a Black maid in their house, and they each  treat her as one of the family. In doing so, they make it their personal decision to treat her well, regardless of what the families in Maycomb think.

In the present day, many families have different thoughts on people with other religions/skin colour .

Many have different thoughts about a person who is perceived as an outsider.

For example, if a friend were to come over and he was dressed rather sloppily, and spoke with different accented English,your family might judge them . Both of your accents are not inherently superior, they are just different.It is to note that things like accented English are inherent and are not able to change. The base rule is to not judge someone on something they cannot change.

Prejudice is a natural behaviour. Some might say that it is a learned behaviour. While that can be somewhat true, it’s more on the thought of the individual and not the person or people who are trying to show them how to think or to act when seeing someone that looks different. Instead of looking at someone on the outside, start looking at them from the inside to know who they are. We should keep in mind these thoughts in order to overcome the prejudice in our society.

the play romeo and juliet was one of the most famous love tragedies ever written. this love story unfortunately had a fatal ending. many people argue over why the lovers had died, was it over free will or fate?  

the death of romeo and juliet was partially because of free will. the fact that romeo and juliet got married knowing that there was a bitter feud between their families, the montague and capulet’s. this feud brought on many problems, such as the murder of tybalt by romeo. juliet knew that this might be a problem for her and romeo. juliet had said: “what’s in a name”? which explains her ill fate of being a capulet and romeo being a montague. when romeo tells his servant “ ay, mine own…show more content…

i believe they had died over the love they had for each other, strong enough that their lives could end so suddenly if something horrible had come between them, and that was exactly how it happened. this tragedy occurred within five days of the two meeting, they experienced love at first sight, got married and quickly were dead. free will became a part of this when juliet decided to take friar laurence’s advise in inhaling a potion that will make people assume she is died but will awake in 42 hours prier to when she took it. when romeo had heard the news that juliet was dead, he assumed it was true, and responded with the line; “well juliet, i will lay with thee tonight”. to me this line indicated how he feels for juliet by dying in her will. the fact that free will didn’t take control of the story; it left fate to be the murder of the lovers. fate first kicked in when their eyes met at the capulet party. when romeo and juliet spoke, their words had powerful contentment; they had such a strong feeling for one another that they could lay in each other’s arms forever. their happiness didn’t last long; there were many reasons for this, for example; the marriage lord capulet arranged between paris and juliet. i believe that the plot of the play thus far leads the audience to believe that the deaths were a result of fate. the last act will determine once and for all if it is fate or free will. romeo again challenges fate.

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there is 2 main differences, basically which are the users and the market. the other difference is the kind of content

people who use tik tok are mainly people from east asia, kind of like the app douyin. musically, on the other hand, are used by people from america or european countries.

while tik tok videos show things like daily life videos, comedy, or just funny videos, musically are like people mimicking songs with their own actions, 'imitate' singers and video clips.

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