I'm writing a personal letter and i was wondering if you could check to see if my grammar in these following sentences is correct or if it's missing a comma. i don't want to post the entire letter because its personal. you.
i am so blessed to have you in my life and i would not be where i am today if it was not for you.
all of our heart felt conversations that we have had and continue to have, keep my mind in the right direction.
you for being there when i had my mri done. my nerves got the best of me and you being in the room me make it through the test.
you me to not be scared, about all the things i feared. when other people put me down, you me get right back up
i could not ask for a better uncle, godfather, and friend. we have become even closer and have created a bond that is unbreakable.
i never imagined that it would come to the point where i would have to go out of state for medical .
you are my guardian angel and i am so blessed. (should the word guardian angel be capitalized)

I am so blessed to have you in my life and I would not be where I am today if it was not for you.

All of our heart felt conversations that we have had and continue to have, help keep my mind in the right direction.

Thank you for being there when I had my MRI done. My nerves got the best of me and you being in the room helped me make it through the test.

You helped me to not be scared, about all the things I feared. When other people put me down, you helped me get right back up

I could not ask for a better uncle, godfather, and friend. We have become even closer and have created a bond that is unbreakable.

I never imagined that it would come to the point where I would have to go out of state for medical help.

You are my guardian angel and I am so blessed. (Should the word guardian angel be capitalized)

Explanation:

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)