Drag each sentence to the correct location on the table Classmates Enrique and Jerry need to prepare a presentation about road safety for bicyclists. They have learned in class that a good thesis statement is a sentence that
makes a claim and is not simply a fact identify the thesis statements that Enrique and Jerry have come up with as either strong or weak.
cities need to take an active role
in improving the safety of
bicyclists
A bicycle helmet protects the skull
and brain by absorbing shock
during an accident
Bike lanes have proven to be very
effective in improving bike safety
in urban areas
Many bicyclists do not buy
protective headgear, or they
buy a helmet but do not use it

Read the sentence below about the chicago fire of 1871. schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the chicago fire of 1871. which revision is the best example of adding concrete details? schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the chicago fire. schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive chicago fire of 1871. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in chicago. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the chicago fire of 1871.