When Lauren prepares the first draft of an important message, she carefully outlines the message. Then, as she writes, she labors over each sentence, pausing to choose just the right word. She reads each sentence aloud after writing it. When composing, Lauren often loses her place and has to reread the message to check the logical flow of ideas. What advice would you give Lauren to help her improve her composing process

Autopia is a perfect place which is impossible - there is no way that such a place could possibly exist.sir thomas more once wrote his utopia where he portrayed a seemingly perfect society where there was no crime, no pain, no suffering, famine, lack of any resources. however, it turned out that these people lived in a dictatorship and didn't know that their lives were actually bad. my vision of a utopia would include a similar thing - no hate, wars, pain and suffering, a place where everyone would be happy and satisfied. however, unfortunately, that is impossible.