Please give me your honest opinion on a poem on mine! Good or bad. If there is already an "answer" please use the comment section. This poem is about being Bisexual and searching for love but fighting self doubt and anxiety, I hope you enjoy. (I recommend reading it with "Pathways" by Prof. Lacasse playing in the background)

“Remember Him”
By; Jacob Odom

Remember when you longed for love
That someone just meant for you
Remember when you sat alone
At your table meant for two
Remember when you fell for him
But none could ever know
Remember when your heart cried out
But you could never show
Remember when you told yourself
That “they can never see”
Remember when you hoped he’d touch your hand
And whisper that his you’ll be
Remember how you’d skip a beat
And feel his warm embrace
Remember how he’d look at you
With a smile across his face
Remember how he’d have cared for you
When others turned away
Remember how those who really cared
Would’ve had your back and stay
Remember when you would’ve told your father
Who would have scolded you to “GO AWAY!”
Remember when you would’ve told your love
Then by his trustful side you’d lay
Now still you wish to feel his warm embrace
And the gentle comfort of his smile
Now still loyal to your love you stay
Remembering him all the while
All while you’d lay at night in sleep
All while you’d see his gentle smile
Remembering him in hopes to keep
Hoping for him to one day see
To live your life in humble glee
Remembering him as your one “to be”
But still you sit at your table for two
Remembering when you longed for love
But it could never come true…
So alone you sit
At your table meant for two...
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This is an updated version of my previous post about this poem (if you would like to read the original version of my post, you can find it on my account under "questions")