Read the following passage, which contains a shift in tone: I am writing to request that our school add a soccer program to its list of sports. Soccer is growing in popularity around the country, and as of now Huntington Middle School is one of the only schools in the area
that ain't got it! Soccer's sweet because it leads to physical fitness and
teamwork - it also promotes other cultures and helps you learn about
the world, which is rad.

Which of the following revisions best corrects the shift in tone and maintains
a formal style throughout?

Your answer is A

make sure you read the paragraphs to make sure you push the correct one.

anyone who was dealing with communism in soviet union in his time had an ideal picture of equality, freedom, the struggle of the working class for a better future, the success of the aristocracy's overthrow and the emancipation of subjugation.   however, anyone who would go to soviet union to see the functioning of the communist system, would be convinced that it was about sad people, about everyday bad life, about the brutal attitude of communist leaders, about ill obsession to completely exterminate every thought on aristocracy. thus, orwell wanted to show all the absurdity, the brutality of the system, the unbearable rule of suspicious morality, the ignorant people who try to play professionally.

the answers are: b. and e.