Which of the following sentences is written correctly? A.
Waddling toward her mom, hunger came over the cheerless baby.
B.
When the baby cries loudly before it is time for her to go to sleep.
C.
The helpless baby crying over not having anything to eat right away.
D.
The baby waddled toward her mom because she was terribly hungry.

Read the sentence below about the chicago fire of 1871. schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the chicago fire of 1871. which revision is the best example of adding concrete details? schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the chicago fire. schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive chicago fire of 1871. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in chicago. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the chicago fire of 1871.