You and nine peers have been selected to apply for an important college scholarship. Only one student will be awarded the scholarship. You have been asked to write a brief essay to the scholarship committee in which you share an important event in your
life that significantly changed you, your view about life, your life goals, or your character for the better. Apply narrative techniques, a
solid prewriting strategy, and creative sentence patterns to share your story and stand apart from other applicants.
Please and thank you :)

I would first off like to thank you for even considering me in your prestigious college. I would first like to start off with why you should consider me in your prestigious college first i think i would be a good fit because im amazing at speaking in front of people im an honeral student and i get good grades, now what makes me different from other people who have the same thing will for one i have my college life planned i want to at the top of all my classes. My goal for this year is to be on the debate club and talk about subjects that are relevant to college life such as dorm rooms food on campus and jobs on campus , i also want to join the student council to countuined to talk about more things like school work.My goal in life is to be a lawyer so i can stick up for things that i see unfit and unjustice i also think this college would be perfect for me because i can pratice my campainings skills and people skills. i also think you should give me the scholorship because my personailty i bright, loveing, kind , respectful and im a hard worker , which would be perfect for your college.Thank you for considering me for your scholorship  

sorry, i just really need points. and to this question, maybe i know the answer. but i have no time now. d