Narrative Writing: Removing Irrelevant Details paragraph below has one sentence that is not relevant to the narrative. Cross out that sentence to strengthen the paragraph. It was a crisp autumn morning, and Quinn and her mother were exploring the local farmers market. Her mother's eye-catching red scarf danced in the breeze as they strolled through the market, buying some crusty bread here, a few vegetables there. Quinn followed along, picking her way through the crowd, admiring how the trees had turned into multi-colored works of art. This past summer had been the hottest one on record. Suddenly, Quinn realized she didn't see her mother anywhere! She scanned the crowd, hoping to catch a glimpse of her mother's bright red scarf. A spicy-sweet smell caught Quinn's attention, and she saw her mother walking toward her holding two cups of fresh, steaming apple cider.