Some of my pleasantest hours were during the long rain-storms in the spring or fall, which confined me to the house for the afternoon as well as the forenoon, soothed by their ceaseless roar and pelting; when an early twilight ushered in a long evening in which many thoughts had time to take root and unfold themselves. in those driving northeast rains which tried the village houses so, when the maids stood ready with mop and pail in front entries to keep the deluge out, i sat behind my door in my little house, which was all entry, and thoroughly enjoyed its protection. which is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?

1.some of my pleasantest hours were during the long rain-storms in the spring or fall”
2.“which confined me to the house for the afternoon as well as the forenoon”
3.“when the maids stood ready with mop and pail in front entries to keep the 4.deluge out”
4.“i sat behind my door in my little house, which was all entry, and thoroughly enjoyed its protection”

The answer is 1: Some of my pleasantest hours were during the long rain-storms in the spring or fall.

 Writers use the five senses to raise the reader's interest. The sensory details help to bring the reader to the world the writer is creating and making all to come to life. The speaker talks about "his or her pleasantest hour" that will result in "soothed by their ceaseless roar and pelting". All indicating  vivid sensory details.

The answer is 1: Some of my pleasantest hours were during the long rain-storms in the spring or fall.

 Writers use the five senses to raise the reader's interest. The sensory details help to bring the reader to the world the writer is creating and making all to come to life. The speaker talks about "his or her pleasantest hour" that will result in "soothed by their ceaseless roar and pelting". All indicating  vivid sensory details.

i’m writing a memoir and i’ve been given the great suggestion of placing a ‘sub-narrative’ within some of the chapters – sort of, what was going on with me in the grand scheme of things.

i was wondering how to format this so that it is very obvious we are stepping out the of story.

firstly is a change in font from serif to sans workable? i also use dashes for a scene change. was thinking of using a different scene-changer too.

here’s a (shortened) example:

university – or what’s known as ‘uni’ in australia – were some of the best days of my life. where else do you get to potter around in a great location, have very little responsibility, learn lots of things, do lots of things and walk out four years later with a bonus – a degree!

with my university years i had immersed myself into community of intelligent ambitious people. generally everyone had a confidence about themselves. they knew where they were going in life and weren’t threatened by others.

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next normal paragraph continues here…

(sorry couldn’t show the fonts in this comment field)

too much?

pandora was the poor unfortunate soul that was tricked into letting all of the evil of the world out of the pithos (any percy jackson fans out / box.