Iggy is revising the following excerpt from his research-based essay on the effectiveness of animal shelters Behaviorists studied sheltered animals to determine whether these animals showed increased signs of stress. These clinicians hypothesized that behaviors such as whale eye are much more prevalent in shelter inhabitants.

Which revisions should Iggy make to best improve the readability for his audience (tenth grade classmates and his teacher)?

A) Iggy should include personal perspective of owning a shelter pet.

B) He should combine the sentences to make the text easier to read.

C) He should include extended definitions for more challenging vocabulary.

D) He should include all behaviors of the stressed dogs observed by the clinicians.

THE ANSWER IS C ON EDG​

C.) He should include extended definitions for more challenging vocabulary.

Explanation:

Edge 21.

it's c

Explanation:

did the test on edge

research question: do the predicted benefits of genetic enhancements outweigh the possible negative consequences of this technology?  

what information do i need to research in order to answer this question?  

-predicted benefits of genetic enhancements

-negative consequences of genetic enhancements

-existing, if any, consequences of the new technology

-possible consequences if the technology is perfected

what sources will have the information?

-scientific research documents or news articles summarizing research

-articles in science and medical journals, magazines, and electronic databases

-books

-experts at genetics: geneticists, scientists, professors

here you go have a nice day