The Good Fund Bank’s management wants to analyze the weather’s impact on area home costs and send the analysis to its investors. Lee, the bank’s marketing executive, is writing the report. The primary audience of Lee’s report is the bank’s customers
. The secondary audience of Lee’s report is the bank’s
investors
.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

never read it so if i had i would definitely you sorry.

if you don't mind posting the paragraph so i could read it that would a lot. (;

you need to make an explanation. so, since you did not include one, so no one, and i mean no one can unfortunately you,