Running across the basketball court, the ball almost fell out of her hands. How is this sentence best written?
A Running across the basketball court as the ball almost fell out of her hands.
B
As she was running across the basketball court, the ball almost fell out of her hands.
С
Running across the basketball court and the ball almost falling out of her hands.
As she was running the ball almost fell out of her hands as she was running across the court.

B. As she was running across the basketball court, the ball almost fell out of her hands.

Explanation:

This sentence uses proper words and a comma. The comma connects both topics. It provides all of the information, such as the basketball court, and her.

A. Does not mention her, so it is confusing.

C. Is wordy and confusing.

D. Uses "running" twice and is confusing.

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to leave the reader thinking and wandering on their own. without a resolution we are clueless to what happens next, and why it does. it may even cause suspension with the reader.

explanation:

the narrator is a first person, participant one, who describes in the simple past tense important and difficult events in his earlier life. he also provides temporal markers as the month (january) and the time (12: 30 pm). finally the account of his experience is very detailed, to the extent that a participant narrator would talk the same way about his experiences. a good example of such detail is the mention of the “bovril ration” which historically was a native american food adopted by european explorers in arctic and antarctic regions due to its high level of calories.