What are some ways you can make an essay/memoir better?

Wha is"centrifugal bumble puppy "? why is it important for games to require a complication apparatus? (brave new world)

Which excerpt is told from third-person point of view? o a. i walked slowly along the canal and said aloud to myself, "emma, what are you doing here? " b. you walked slowly along the canal and said aloud to yourself, "i have no idea what i'm doing here. c. emma walked sidly along the canal and said aloud to herself. "i don't have a clue what i'm doing here." d. walking slowly along the canal. i said aloud to myself, "emma, you have no idea what you're doing here.

Read this excerpt from the declaration of independence