Can someone please help me with this?!! Revise the paragraphs below by combining sentences, fixing faulty parallelism and coordination, and correcting other sentence faults such as fragments and run-ons.

Looks good revisions below

Explanation:

Ok so you say State House twice in the first sentence, so maybe you could try using other words.

You also say, "Now known as the Liberty bell." And you say it right after saying that we call the hall Independence Hall, so say something like:

'And now, we call the bell, Liberty Bell.'

Put a comma after Pennsylvania Assembly. (First paragraph Fourth Sentence)

When you say "It would right to call lawmakers to meetings." Did you mean ring?

In paragraph 2, connect sentences 4 &5.

Otherwise it looks really good! You got good skill!!!

Hopefully that helped!

i think the first one, it makes the most sense.

the best sentence that shows the best placement for the modifier "on the ice" is the one which contains it in the end of the sentence or in its beggining followed by a comma, that indicates it works as adverbial, dislocated in the sentence.

the girl promptly slid on her rollers on the ice.

on the ice, the girl promptly slid on her rollers.