What is the claim to the story making the future better, together?

What is wrong with the sentence. the car is packed, we're already to go, and the weather is looking beautiful.

"ten from the sea to the sand he walks, to look in the soil, but not in the box''!

Alittle later than his thisbe had, and he could see what surely were the tracks of a wild beast left clearly on deep dust. his face grew ashen. and when he had found the bloodstained shawl, he cried: "now this same night will see two lovers lose their lives: she was the one more worthy of long life: it's i who bear the guilt for this. which statement best describes how the order of events creates tension?