How could this essay draft best be revised to clarify meaning and enhance style? A. Maintain a formal style. B. Use transitions to clarify the flow of ideas. C. Clarify the topic and purpose in the topic sentence. D. Use evidence that supports the topic sentence more clearly.

i think this would be D, because there isn't much evidence present. everything else seems pretty okay.

hope this helps, but i am not sure.

its probably fingerprint or personality

just took the test;

argument: "it's time to wage a war against britain to secure american freedom."

claims: "america has tried every peaceful method available for seperating from england" & "the americans' petitions to the king have been turned away by him."