PLEASE HELP!!

Just revise the passage, like it says. Replace some words, spruce it up a bit. Make sentences more formal than they are informal.

Explanation:

For example, in the sentence "stop them from bringing products in," you could say "stop them from importing products." Just find a good spot for the words export and blockade, like it tells you to. Review every single sentence - How can you improve them, or make them sounds better?

well stockyards mean a large yard containing pens and sheds, typically adjacent to a slaughterhouse, in which livestock is kept and sorted. and i'm assuming that by party you   mean a large group of people which does make sense because chicago is a very crowded place much like new york. stockyards tend to take up a lot of room due to needing the area for pens to keep animals in and the fact that stockyards are usually right by slaughterhouse where they process and distribute the product. so its much like a zoo but with some dead animal products close by.