This is the first paragraph of Tanyika’s analytical essay. The main character in this story seems foolish at first because she doesn’t follow the advice of the elders in her clan. She is very beautiful, and several young men want to marry her. She refuses all of them, and instead decides to live alone. Later, she avoids starvation by becoming an expert fisherwoman.

What should you say to Tanyika about this paragraph, if you become part of her peer review group? plsss ASAP