Read this sentence from Passage 1. "The dog barely missed Country Mouse who breathlessly slipped to safety into a hole in the wall." Click on the sentence in Passage 2 that shows the same event from a different point of view.

the second sentence is a great revision in my opinion. that would be a great topic.

explanation:

wheres the following authors?

the answer is camped

the answer should be the first one. "many people find his lyrics very moving."

it by far makes the most grammatical sense and is very objective, removing any first person from the original sentence and keeping with the sentence fluency.