Craft a response to the prompt below using the prewrite structure below. Use the notes you collected on “Fine?” Complete one round of self-editing/revision, and one round of peer-editing/revision. Prompt: What is Bailey’s point of view about her circumstance? How does the author develop that point of view? Cite evidence to support your answer.

Topic Sentence: Restate the question (Topic) and add your points
Sample Sentence Starter: In the story "Fine?" Bailey's about her circumstance is developed in the story through her and .

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figurative language is a resource that fiction writers use to make better descriptions of what they want to write about or express. they can improve their stories, as they can elaborate more vivid and colorful sentences. this way, the reader will be able to have more detailed images in his/her mind.

places, objects, people and even feelings or emotions can be described with a lot of detail to metaphors, similes and personifications. making different kinds of comparisons to make a description more specific, as well as assigning human qualities to non-human objects (and vice-versa) can be very useful for science fiction writers.  

on the other hand, alliterations allow writers to elaborate more entertaining and creative sentences. it consists in using a sequence of words that start with the same consonant letter. they can be used to emphasize something important the writer wants to express, or just as a fun literary device.