Hey guys, I was wondering if you could read through a short story of mine that I wrote for a small contest. I am looking for constructive criticism, if it isn't good please don't tell me that it is lol. I have also written two possible outcomes for the story but am not sure which one to choose. (:

I like it! I think it's really good in my opinion! great job!

question 1: d) the old man continued, "in the long run, what people think about shepherds and bakers becomes more important for them than their own destinies.'"

question 2: d) by providing a different perspective and encouraging the englishman to never give up, the boy him to discover the alchemist.

question 3: c) the stones he gave santiago the boy to recognize omens, which will him on his journey to find his personal legend.

question 4: d) when the englishman wants to quit, santiago doesn’t allow the englishman to give up.

question 5: a) by instructing the englishman to go and try, the englishman is motivated to continue on his journey toward his personal legend.

explanation:

it the climax in the poem