Grammarly says that this is an intricate text writing issue. Sentence: "My input to the conversations not only provided a different perspective but also brought attention to global topics like greed and justice that further led to a meaningful discussion."

Can anyone fix the sentence without changing the meaning?

Before ending this lesson, take a moment to review an informative research essay you have written. you’ve probably already written a conclusion to the essay. but is it the best conclusion it can be? does it properly summarize the main subtopics of your essay? does it state in one or two sentences the “so what” of your topic. if your topic was abraham lincoln, your essay shouldn’t be just about abraham lincoln. it should answer, “so what about abraham lincoln? ” take five or ten minutes, and looking only at that single paragraph, revise your conclusion