Context: This is for my final english paper but I want some opinions if I can to help get me started and add to my essay. The prompt is:
Is the American Dream real?
Please add reasoning as to why your think it is or isn't (no in between). Thank you.

The American Dream is the ideal by which equality of opportunity is available to any American, allowing the highest aspirations and goals to be achieved. I believe the American Dream is real and achievable, because no matter how small you start, you will be able to move higher and move closer to your goals in America through hard work. This is called social mobility which is the key part of the American dream, and it successfully allows it to happen. Many immigrants who were motivated by the American Dream to move to America have worked hard, and are now very successful so this shows that the American Dream is real. In many other countries, if you worked that hard many times nothing will happen. Another part of the American Dream is equality and freedom. In the present, America has a lot more freedom and equality than other countries. It has democracy that allows everyone to be heard, and anyone can do anything they want no matter what their race, gender, and ethnicity are. These are the key points of the American Dream and they are all happening so that is why I believe the American Dream is real.

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