PLEASE HELP THIS IS DUE RIGHT NOW Use the paragraph to answer the question.

Camping is fun. It's nice to enjoy the outdoors. Many people like to hike. Some like to swim or fish. There is plenty to do on a camping trip.

Write three to five sentences detailing what this paragraph lacks and how it might be improved.

50 ! your poem must include the following: ● poetic form: lines and stanzas (not paragraphs! ) o your poem needs to be at least 10 lines long. ● sensory details/strong imagery o “paint a picture” and/or create an emotion with your words, word choice is key in poetry ● figurative language o include at least one of the following: metaphor, simile, and/or personification (click here for more info. on these) ● sound devices o include at least one of the following: repetition, rhyme, rhythm, meter, onomatopoeia, and/or alliteration (click here for more info. on these) ● labels o underneath your poem, include the words from the poem that represent the figurative language and sound devices and label them o examples: booming bombs - alliteration; like a firefly - simile you so