Which revision of Spencer's essay best uses a formal tone?
Spencer needs to revise his essay to use a more
formal tone.
One cool fact I found studying Greek mythology is the
connection to modern names. For instance, my
hometown, East Sparta, Ohio, is named after the
home of the awesome Greek warriors!
One interesting fact I found studying Greek
mythology is the connection to modern names. My
hometown is East Sparta, Ohio, which is named
after the home of the fierce Greek warriors.
Isn't it interesting how Greek mythology connects
to modern names? East Sparta, Ohio, for instance,
is named after Sparta in Greece, which you know is
home to the strong Greek warriors.
An interesting fact about Greek mythology is its
connection to many modern names. One example
is East Sparta Ohio, a town that takes its name
from the home of Greece's famous warriors.
Have you noticed how many modern names come
from Greek mythology? I didn't know until now that
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