I don't know how to do a topic sentence for my first body paragraph for an explanatory essay so I tried doing two tell me which is less bad ? A)First Willowdean’s mom provides to her financially. It may be a basic thing but it counts.

B)You would agree that first comes the basic things but they count like how Willowdean’s mom provides to her financially.

Araby every morning i lay on the floor in the front parlour watching her door. the blind was pulled down to within an inch of the sash so that i could not be seen. when she came out on the doorstep my heart leaped. i ran to the hall, seized my books and followed her. i kept her brown figure always in my eye and, when we came near the point at which our ways diverged, i quickened my pace and passed her. this happened morning after morning. i had never spoken to her, except for a few casual words, and yet her name was like a summons to all my foolish blood. what is the general tone of the passage? a. courageous b. comical c. passionate d. fearful