Can someone fix this narrative and make it better. if lacking information just make some up Central idea is being judge unfairly, so about shyness i guess

It was a large house with a lot of people inside. I was part of the house where some peeps were chilling out at. About a year ago. A couple of my friends but most of the people there I didn't know.

I was called rude for not answering something a guy asked me.

It only got worse because I didn't know how to respond due to my shyness.

I felt bad because i thought i was being rude to the people but they were judging me based on how quiet i was. I decided the best thing to do was respond to the person

I felt amazing during it because I was getting a good rush. I decided to confront the person based on their actions.

I started to actually feel bad for the person because now I knew I was being rude. This time around of told the person a better way to treat something like me.

I figured out that it actually is better to confront a person like the one in my story. I have become more confident because of my confrontation. It affected me probably in the best way it could which was a really good experience.

Write 2. using what you have learned about evidence, explanation, quotations, and paraphrase, write your body paragraphs in the space below. muir and wordsworth you will need to include at least one of each of the following: a direct quotation introduced with a complete sentence and a colon a direct quotation introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence a paraphrased example an embedded quotation locate 3. within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate a direct quotation that is introduced with a complete sentence and a colon. copy and paste it here. be sure to include the entire sentence that contains the quotation as well as the explanation sentence(s) that come after it. 4. within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate a direct quotation that is introduced with a signaling phrase and a comma. copy and paste it here. be sure to include the entire sentence that contains the quotation as well as the explanation sentence(s) that come after it. 5. within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate a direct quotation that is introduced and explained in one sentence. copy and paste it here. 6. within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate one paraphrased example and copy and paste it here. 7. within the body paragraphs of your essay, locate one embedded quotation and copy and paste it here. 8. using techniques learned in this lesson, write the conclusion to your essay in the space below. 9. how did you connect your introduction and your conclusion? (did you use a similar technique, repetition of a significant word or phrase, explain. 10. copy and paste the words or sentence that signals closure of your essay. 11. copy and paste the sentences that synthesize your ideas. remember, synthesis combines the main ideas of your essay and comments on the significance of those ideas. 12. copy and paste the sentences that answer the question from the prompt: what conclusion or implications can you draw? (it is ok if you have these sentences as a part of your synthesis or challenge to your audience. include them here as well. it is also ok if these sentences are separate from those two elements.) 13. copy and paste the sentences from your conclusion that challenge your audience to think, feel, or do something.

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