Write a descriptive essay about a family's kitchen faucet that poured out chocolate instead of water

For english i have to find 4 errors in each diary post

Which statement describes how connotationis used in this passage

"night. no one was praying for the night to pass quickly. the stars were but sparks of the immense conflagration that was consuming us. were this conflagration to be extinguished one day, nothing would be left in the sky but extinct stars and unseeing eyes." explain the images included in the passage. how is the use of the image of night contradictory to how we might expect it to be used