Grammar: Run-On Sentences I am on the grammar run on sentence game. Does anyone know what the passwords are to move on? I am on the first question still. I sure that it is a Fused run on sentence but fused is not the password. Here is the hint that asks a more specific question.

Look at the sentence again: I couldn't wait so I went in without you too bad you were late.
What type of run-on sentence is this?

- free verse.

- " in poetry, one of the best ways to practice technique is to write in. i want all to be unstressed so that “all the clocks” and “in the night” are matching anapests. many forms that sharpen skills are useful in free verse."

pulling in the reader is important

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.