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Today was an experience I’m supper glad I could have. It started out with my family and I waking up at five in the morning to get to the airport. I hardly slept the night before because I was excited to be going in an airplane the first time. Once we got to the airport, I could see how big the planes were but once inside they don’t look too big. The flight had a lot of turbulence and my mom was getting nervous. Although I really enjoyed it, I just imagined it as a roller-coaster. Once we were about to land, I look out the window and I could see all the clouds it was amazing I could imagine touching them and seeing how soft they were. After that We went inside the clouds it was super foggy but cool. Once we got out of the clouds, I could see the city it was big! And seeing it from above it was pretty

Today was quite the experience. I'm feel very euphoric about having to go through with it. My family and I woke up at five in the morning to leave for the airport, the start to my great adventure! I had hardly slept the night before due to all the excitement I was feeling about flying in an airplane for the first time. Once we had got to the airport, I could see all the big airplanes and how amazing they looked up close. But the excitement of the big planes had died down when we got into the actual thing, to put it bluntly, it wasn't as cool as I had hoped. On the ride to our destination, there was a lot of turbulence and my mother had begun to grow nervous. I wasn't very aware of this thought because I was enjoying the roller-coaster of a ride. As the plane was getting closer to landing, I looked out the window to see all the majestic clouds rolling by below us, I thought it was amazing! I imagined reaching out to touch them, feeling how soft they were. When the plane had flown into the clouds, it was all foggy, a interesting experience. As we exited the cloudy part of the ride, I could see the huge city! It was an impowering feeling and so beautiful to see it from above. I'm extremely happy to have gone on this tip and hope to feel this way again fairly soon!

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administration noun

the government of a country

affairs

events and activities relating to the government, politics, economy, etc. of a country, region, or the world

the corridors (of power)

the places where people use their political influence and major political decisions are made

government

the process, method, or effects of governing

play politics

to use politics for your own reasons, without caring about the effects on other people

political

relating to politics

political

interested or involved in politics

politically

in a political way

politicize

to bring an issue, organization, way of doing something, etc. to the attention of the public so that it can be discussed

politicize

to make someone more interested and involved in politics

politicking

political activity by someone who is only interested in doing things for their own advantage, not in other people

politics

the ideas and activities involved in getting power in a country or over a particular area of the world

politics

the profession of being a politician

politics

the ideas and activities used by people within a particular group to try to get power

public affairs

political issues that affect most people

public life

work that involves being known to a lot of people, especially in politics, but also in religion and education

public office

a job in the government that you have because you were chosen or elected

public service

work or important positions in the government, or in organizations controlled by the government

representation

in politics, the job of officially people and making decisions for them

sociopolitical

involving a combination of social and political matters

state

the government of a country