Write an argumentative essay for or against viewing sports figures and celebrities as positive role models.

Do you have a role model? If you do, thats cool! I dont think viewing celebrities/sports figures as role models in todays century is a great idea. The reasons are celebrities are often linked with bad behavior violence and so many other unacceptable behaviors, they usually have kids that look up to them and it would be bad if the kids did some bad things that they saw their role models do and you dont really know them so you dont know what they are capable of.

    The first reason why it isnt so great to view celebrities/sports figures as role models is that celebrities are often linked with bad behavior. Like Kayne west, he has reportedly caused disturbances at a series of other events. A lot of people look up to him and he doesnt care because if he did he would act like a role model.  

    The second reason why it isnt so great to view celebrities/sports figures as role models because many celebrities have some followers who are very young, and they know that very well. But that doesn't stop them from behaving in a way that their younger fans aren't able to see. While they are not obligated to behave like saints, as they know they have young followers, they bear some responsibility for the picture they project.

     The last reason  why it isnt so great to view celebrities/sports figures as role models is because you dont really know them so you dont know what they are a capable of. You think they are nice and kind until they do something bad and that would really hurt to know that your role model isnt a good as he/her say they are.

    In conclusion, its best if your model is someone you know like your mom or your neighbor etc. The reason you should view celebrities/sports figures as role models is because that  celebrities are often linked with bad behavior violence and so many other unacceptable behaviors, they usually have kids that look up to them and it would be bad if the kids did some bad things that they saw their role models do and you dont really know them so you dont know what they are capable of.

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