Using your understanding of restrictive and nonrestrictive information, rewrite the paragraph below. Correct the punctuation errors by adding or removing commas. Moving to a new place can be tough on anyone especially if the move is to a new state. At the start of a move you may think that many things will be different in your life, and that nothing will be enjoyable, ever again. Your surroundings may have to change. Your good friends and favorite activities however do not. You can still maintain your friendships through a variety of technological ways which may include talking on a cell phone, writing an email, and seeing a friend on video chat. Technology can help you stay in contact, and be up to date with everything that your friends are doing. You can even continue doing your favorite activities which might include sports. Most towns and cities have their own teams, leagues, or clubs for popular activities. So you really do not have to give up what you love to do. Knowing, that your friends and activities do not have to change, can help you be more open to the idea of moving.

bevy means a large group or thing of a certain kind.

i’m writing a memoir and i’ve been given the great suggestion of placing a ‘sub-narrative’ within some of the chapters – sort of, what was going on with me in the grand scheme of things.

i was wondering how to format this so that it is very obvious we are stepping out the of story.

firstly is a change in font from serif to sans workable? i also use dashes for a scene change. was thinking of using a different scene-changer too.

here’s a (shortened) example:

university – or what’s known as ‘uni’ in australia – were some of the best days of my life. where else do you get to potter around in a great location, have very little responsibility, learn lots of things, do lots of things and walk out four years later with a bonus – a degree!

with my university years i had immersed myself into community of intelligent ambitious people. generally everyone had a confidence about themselves. they knew where they were going in life and weren’t threatened by others.

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too much?

jenkins wanted the narrator to write a ghost story for his magazine. he wanted the narrator to give the readers a story based on the supernatural. he wanted him to give the readers real 'horror' stories and not the type of live ghosts which he had presented in his earlier stories.