Read the conclusion from a personal narrative Which sentence, if added, would make the best

revision of the conclusion?

Even though we were lost in the desert for several

hours, we made it home safely, because we had

packed extra food and water. Our families were very

relieved to see us alive and well

"Where is the main trail?" I asked while searching

the map

After surviving those miserable hours in the desert, 1

learned the value of being prepared

My friends invited me to go for a hike, and although

it was a hot summer day, I agreed to go, because

had nothing else to do

"Be sure to drink some water" Tara reminded us

Usually, when people talk about "rocky” relationships, it’s with a frown, but mine has enriched my life. i became fascinated with rocks when i was really young, and throughout my childhood you could usually find me with my pockets bulging from whatever stony treasures i’d scavenged that day. when my science teacher taught us a unit on geology, i realized that my fascination could become an exciting career that could also me make good money. obtaining an internship to work on the geological exhibit at the museum is an important step on my road to being a geologist. the best description of the writer’s point of view is that the person is eager to make a lot of money in a museum internship. insistent that geology should be taught as part of every science course. hopeful to be able to further the goal of eventually becoming a geologist. concerned that people do not generally relate well to the study of geology.

If your job was precarious, would you look for a new one? explain.

What is the main source of conflict in this passage? lee grew up near the old-growth forest. she loved wandering the trails and looking at the natural beauty around her. but the city council recently approved plans to cut down the forest in order to build a shopping center and apartment buildings. the council believed the development would create new jobs and provide more affordable housing. lee was upset when she heard about the plans to destroy her beloved forest, and she vowed to do something to save it.