Which revision improves the professional tone of the text?
Read the excerpt from a report.
(1) Cleaning up the existing garbage in the ocean
would begin to address the issue of climate change. (2)
A company called the Ocean Cleanup Project has
successfully developed a self-contained system that
collects ocean garbage. (3) It uses the natural forces of
the ocean to dump floating plastic. (4) The system
consists of a thing, which holds a ten-foot screen below
and catches the waste. (5) It would be awesome to
have a bunch of these systems removing garbage.
O Change sentence 1 to: "Cleaning up garbage in the
ocean would be way better for the environment."
O Change sentence 2 to: "A company called the
Ocean Cleanup Project has cleaned up a ton of
ocean garbage."
O Change sentence 4 to: "The system consists of a
big screen below it that catches the stuff."
Change sentence 5 to: "Implementing several of
these systems could remove garbage from the
oceans."

a. by showing how a character reacts to or interacts with his or her   surroundings

explanation:

the setting reveal information about a character by showing how a character reacts to or interacts with his or her   surroundings.

the first paragraph i did this and passed the test with 5 wrong

plagiarism is the act of taking one else's work and passing it off as one's own.

consequences of plagiarism include failure on the plagiarized assignment, grade reduction on given assignment, course failure, in-school suspension, and a possible chance of dismissal.

a myth tells a story about the origins of places or people, from the word "mythos" defined as story of the people. therefore, these two myths describe the genealogy   of the culture. the maori of new zealand based their myths in the universal creation of creatures and nature, the background of all polynesian beliefs. the raven and the first men from the queen charlotte islands (canada) also depicts the creation of men and nature by supernatural or superior power.