An introduction that provides context. A focus statement that states the big idea, a theme of Love That Dog. A supporting point that describes a change in Jack that relates to the theme. Evidence from the text that shows the change in Jack. Elaboration on how the evidence connects to the theme. A concluding statement that connects back to the big idea, the theme of Love That Dog and how Jack changes. A pair of adjectives, ordered correctly. Correct capitalization and punctuation. (Be sure to punctuate quotations correctly!)

the punctuation used in this line was exclamation points. exclamation points can show excitement, anxiousness, and etc.

ian mortimer in his book "the time traveller's guide to elizabethan england" uses a narrative in his style, which successfully conveys a clear description of the life in england in the 16th century. he writes in second person, which makes it comfortable to reader and easy to understand, he captures the readers attention with views of the landscape, the streets, the people including rich and poor. he also depicts some cultural traits from how people behave, eat or what they wear. his descriptions range from the social, economical, the political power to the examples of the life of common people. it could be tell that this book is about social history rather than a   novel.