Can someone please check this and see if it sounds good? Thank you. There are many reasons on how films and text are similar, other than the fact that they both tell a story. Both the film and the text have a “hook” in the beginning. For example, in the film and the text, the narrator told details about the setting. This gets the reader to want to read more about the film and/or text. If there wasn’t a “hook,” it wouldn’t grab the reader or the audience’s attention. It would be boring and tedious. Another reason on how films and text are similar is that they both create a mental picture for the reader/audience. For example, they give brief details about the setting and their surroundings. This gives them a mental note about what’s happening, so they don’t miss what’s coming up. Giving the reader details about the setting can set the mood and later on can change the way characters act.

Hi! I really love your essay, however I do have some statements and questions.

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1. What grade is this for? I'm guessing its from 6th or up.

If you could, you might want to add a introduction and conclusion paragraph.  You could also a paragraph for each reason. It would make it much cleaner. The higher your grade level, the more paragraphs your required to have.

2. If this is not an essay, then it overall looks great! But, if it is an essay, I would recommend you do what I said above.

Goodluck! It seems amazing!

based on the biblical principle philippians 4: 13 "i can do everything through christ who strengthens me." i agree that it is through him that we are given the strength to cope with every situation.

and based on the biblical principle proverbs 16: 32 "better to get angry slowly than to be a hero. better to be even-tempered than to capture a city."   i agree with the author of the passage to the extent that the nobility of heart demonstrates the strength of a person. those who are contemptuous, get angry easily and show their anger toward others are really weak, but those who are noble and make sure to not hurt other people and their feelings are strong people.

maybe attach the passage in case, someone has never read it!

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-sawyer