Can you help me change this up a little for It can be better pls and thank u wednesday July 14th, 2021
What is today….Oh yeah, I almost forgot it is my Birthday. Hi, my name is Mia (something), and this is the story of my crazy life. I am turning 14 today, and right now I am wishing i was not. And if you are wondering why, here is the reason. My parents just divorce, like as in today at this very moment as I speak, I mean write but you know what I mean. And they want me to choose who to live with. And honestly like every 14-year-old, all we can think about is how now we get everything double, so yea I am kind of happy but also, I feel like this is my fault. Because honestly if it was not my fault why have I been mentioned every single time they fought. And you might be wondering what I am talking about so here is a little background information. My parents meet at age 14 and 16, and my mom got pregnant at 17. So, my dad’s parents wanted my mom and my dad to get married after my mom gave birth to me. But after they got married they were always fighting about everything but mainly it was either about money or about how my mother can’t ever get any fresh air because he was always telling her what to do and the same topic ended about me. Yet it still does until about like today, that they are divorced completely. But let’s not think about that right now let’s think about the fact that they haven’t even took a minute or second to say happy birthday, they don’t always say that but I will at least take it for the years I was told the next day.
Thursday July 15th, 2021
Hey today is the next day so (July 15, 2020) today like always I get told Happy Birthday how exciting, but I wish I got it told the correct day, but I have worst news. So first I have to choose between both my parents and now that I got more information so if I go with my mom we are going to Canada and if I go with my dad I go to Alaska, wow can’t believe it but luckily I got one good thing I get to stay for the first semester so I can at least have time with my friends, talking about friends those are the ones who after the first semester I’m going to leave behind. So, keeping count of how people I have to say goodbye too.
1.Yahir (Guy best friend)
2.Gabriella (Girl best friend)
3.Jamillet(Friend)
4.Jarells(Friend)
5.Carlos(Friend)
6.Rafael(Friend)
7.Ja’Myah(Friend)
Tuesday July 20 , 2021

formal arguments

in written, formal arguments, the best way to build credibility with readers is to provide them with evidence. no matter what your argument might be and which side you agree with, citing strong evidence to back up your claim leaves the opposition with little to argue.

emotional appeal is often used in oral arguments. written arguments, however, rely on four main types of evidence. as you read further, you will see that some types are more credible than others and "hold more water" so to speak.

statistical evidence

the strongest type of evidence in formal writing is statistical evidence. this ranges from true, hard data presented as a percentage or number, to survey-type data. for example, statistical evidence could be:

4 out of 5 experts claim

85% of women in the united

7 members were present

statistical evidence can be proven as fact. you can actually go out and find hard information to prove your particular claim.

testimonial evidence

the use of celebrities as credibility evidence can be considered testimonial in nature. many people look up to celebrities as role models in their lives. good or bad, when a person chooses a life-path that takes them into public light, there will be many others out there who want to emulate the celebrity. these celebrity endorsements provide the second-strongest type of evidence found in formal arguments.

testimonial evidence can also be collected from experts and authorities in a given field. doctors, dentists, lawyers often provide expert testimonials. their authority is not often questions. they are expected to "know their stuff."

anecdotal evidence

when storytelling is involved as evidence, anecdotal evidence is being used. due to its less objective nature, anecdotal evidence is not extremely strong. when coupled with statistical or testimonial evidence, anecdotal evidence can be highly effective in determining credibility or proof.

storytelling, although based on fact, can include quite a bit of opinion, thus making it less objective. usually, eyewitnesses are used as providers of anecdotal evidence. they saw or experienced the phenomenon at hand are telling their version or side of the story.

analogical evidence

when information is scarce about something and little is known, analogical evidence is often used in a formal argument to increase credibility of the proof. if the phenomenon in question is new and little is known about it, analogical evidence that pulls in known factors about a similar phenomenon to show parallels can be an effective way to provide proof.

due to limited knowledge about the phenomenon, in this situation, analogical evidence can be regarded as the weakest type of evidence used in formal arguments. one can only imagine and hope that the comparison-phenomenon is close enough that the results can be applied to the new phenomenon.

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all that really matters in a formal argument is whether or not the writer has credible evidence to back up what they want to say or what they are thinking. so often, we hear people say, "prove it! " to one another.

one last little formal arguments not only provide credible evidence to support claims, don't forget that acknowledgment of the opposing point of view in an argument also strengthens the entire product.

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you didn't finish the sentence , how am i gonna you if you didn't finish the sentence