Which is the best revision of the conclusion? Read the excerpt from a student's essay.
Video games can be fun and educational if used wisely.
Unfortunately, they can also be a time waster. School
students have to be careful and use video games wisely.
Some video games are violent. Some children play
video games too often and don't do more productive
activities. I hope you can all be more careful with video
games
O Kids need to watch out for dangerous video games.
Kids must use good judgement when playing video
games.
Kids should spend more time playing video games.
o Kids will be happier if they never play video games.