Write a small moment story-a narrative, something that really happened in your life. In writing this story, you want to incorporate all the different wrong techniques. a strong lead and closing. (7 sentences)

A couple of years back I had experienced one of the most horrific events in my life. It was night time as my eyes were falling shut then I heard the scream from hell.. My mother crying after a phone call she had gotten from the hospital. We all gathered around worried sick as my mother told the story and eventually found out my sister has been in a serious accident with possible fatal injuries. We all were in pure shock not knowing how to react since we've never experienced something like this before. In time we made it to the hospital to see her connected to machines controlling her. We sat there for days begging for good news. She went in for surgery and the doors opened with huge smiles on their faces. It was a success they said! We all were cheering and so happy about the amazing news.  

Explanation:

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