PLEASE HELP I WILL GIVE 40 POINTS PLEASE NO BLANK ANSWERS REAL ANSWERS ONLY Directions: For this assessment, you are going to be revising your three-paragraph pre-assessment based on everything that we have learned about text-based writing (The three C's and concluding statements). Remember that you needed to include a claim, evidence from the text, commentary, and a concluding statement.

Prompt from the pre-assessment:

Should public schools offer pricey “high fashion” uniforms? Why or why not?

However, the idea of real-life people living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain never dawned on me. what would be the best way to revise this sentence for greater clarity? a) however, the fact that columbus left spain thousands of years after people settled what would become the united states never dawned on me. b) it never dawned on me, however, the idea of real-life people living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain. c) however, the fact that people were already living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain never dawned on me. d) however, the idea never dawned on me that long before columbus ever left spain, real-life people lived for thousands of years in what would become the united states.

The image of the observation balloons moving across the sunset is created using -no adjectives -few adjectives -many adjectives

What is one way to appeal to ethos?