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English, 27.01.2020 17:31, staz13wiggins

The following sentence has been revised in several ways. which of the revisions does not improve the awkward or illogical construction?

harmony is when two or more tones fit together in a pleasing combination of sounds.

harmony occurs when two or more tones fit together in a pleasing combination of sounds.

when two or more tones fit together in a pleasing combination of sounds, harmony occurs.

the definition of harmony is when two or more tones fit together in a pleasing combination of sounds.

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