Prompt Question: What is one way that people can work together to make a difference? Thesis: People working together can make a difference in someone’s life or environment.

Body Paragraph:1) Johnathan had come up with a good idea, and thought, “i have to share this idea at school.” 2) He wanted to see if his student council would help out cleaning highways. 3) He told the student council president about his new project he wanted to get started on. 4)They quickly approved it. 5) Everyone had fun while cleaning. 6) They did alot of work, and they were very happy to help their community. 7)It made a difference to the environment and to the animals in it.
1) What transition could be added to the start of sentence 1?
For example,
In conclusion,
In addition,
However,

2) What synonym could be used for the word “good” in sentence 1?
sufficient
acceptable
ingenious
adequate

3) What word should be edited for spelling in sentence 6?
Change to to too
Change alot to a lot
Change their to there
Change community to comunity

4) How should sentence 3 and 4 be combined?
He told the student council president about his new project, he wanted to get started quickly, and they approved it
He told the student council president about his new project, and it was quickly approved.
He told the student council president about his new project he wanted to get started on so thankfully they quickly approved it and they got started right away..
None of the above

5) What word should be edited for capitalization in sentence 1?
He
Idea
I
School

Clearly show? ramona: anna, where does the theme seem to change? anna: according the article: "the fault lies with the fda's inability to release enough information in order to regain the public's trust. but perhaps japan is to blame as well. although there are plans to remove the spent nuclear fuel rods and build a permafrost wall around the four damaged reactors, is this really enough to recover damaged trust? " and then sato goes on to explain this statement. o a. challenging established ideas o b. using evidence to support your conclusions o c. asking clarifying questions o d. synthesizing claims into a single conclusion

Although the account is in good standing at this point in time. is this sentence incomplete or complete?

Will anyone be able to check for grammatical errors and give an opinion on the essay itself? write about the following topic: some people believe that allowing children to make their own cholces on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. —— nowadays, in this busy and fast developing world teaching children from an early age to cope with their own decisions (such as food, clothes etc.) and then take the coincidences after that is something that a lot of people believe that it is important for them. on the other hand other people think that it might end up in a society of humans who put their wishes before anyone else's. but which one of these views will predominate? firstly, the people who allow their children to make their own decisions are the people who everyone should look up to. it is important to let your children learn from the mistakes their make. the parents can not be with them all the time every day and for that reason, teaching them to deal with their decisons or even problems will them in the future. of course, there are always disadvantages such as some people may really forget about that their children will need them at a certain point in life and may loose connection whit them. but that is why it should have that moderately path, where kids will make their own decisions but will feel comfortable to always ask for a advice tueur parents. on the other hand, there are and the second type of parents which think that too much individualism is not good. it really depends on the parents how they will teach their children to carry on with the independence they have. a lot of them might forget that they are still kids and will need and advices from time to time and because of that the parents turn their kids in individuals who only think about their own wishes due to the fact that they are let on their own and have to cope with everyone and everything by themselves. in conclusion, i think that the best decision someone can make is to look up to the first type of parents. that way they will be able to train their children to become independent people who will respect the wishes of others and they will be able to cope with their decisions in the future when they need it.