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1. The author uses a decription hook to hook the reader in their intro. This works because it makes the reader want to know what will happen next in the story.

2. The thesis satement is, "Cell phones are used everywhere, but on the road they are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be prohibited.

3. The author is using facts and adjectives to prove and show their point. (not 100% sure on that one)

4. They are using quotes from experts like the new england journal of medicine, the california traffic safety summit, and the american automobile association. This does help them because these quotes say why drivers should not use phones while driving.

5. The student finishes the essay with a quote from a professional NASCAR racer and then uses a concluding sentence for the readers to think about.

the following key ideas correctly express the key sentence.

restate key idea: most people can learn to swim in ten short lessons.

restate key idea: the majority of water-accident victims require mouth-to-mouth breathing.

restate key idea: an empty, tightly closed gallon jug will support a tired swimmer.  

restate key idea: first aid is to prevent accidents as well as assist in rescue.

explanation: the key idea needs to have the same topic as the key sentence (drowning and safety).