English, 09.11.2020 02:10, taloneyes3535

My Bedroom I share a bedroom with two siblings. It is a big, long, rectangular shaped room. An area of about 10m squared! I observe a very colourful bright room, with a minty, fresh, aromatic scent. “Ahh, I could live here all I want!”
As you walk in, the wall directly to the right of the doorway is my wardrobe. On the right, my soft, warm, fluffy bed lays vertically beside the wall. Behind are two drawers followed by my sister's bed. To the left is the window above my sisters desk in between my siblings bed.
The left of the doorway are stair-shaped shelves between two smooth, and soft closets. Above the shelves is a mirror hung up on the wall. I walk out the door and that is the room I share with my lovely, kind, and heart-warming siblings!

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